Clarissa 1 7.5 7.5 7 22 Ted Buck Pictorial Gold J1 I noticed in all your shots, you have more space behind the model. Learn to give them breathing space in front of them. I will balance better. In this image, she is gorgeously posed, but the space on the right side competes with her. Aperture: 2.8Camera: Canon EOS 6DIso: 100 Central Fire Station 7 7 6.5 20.5 Ted Buck Pictorial Gold J2 The monochrome treatment works well to show off the details in the building. Good sharpness throught. The composition is a bit tight and lacks any breathing room. The image needs to be straightened and also corrected for verticals since it is an architectural subject. There are some odd halos/white keylines along the edges of the flagpoles, roof and upper features that are distracting and should be corrected. Aperture: 8Camera: Canon EOS 6DIso: 100 Clarissa 3 7 7.5 7 21.5 Ted Buck Pictorial Gold J1 Good natural pose. The exposure on her is quite nice. Work with the space around her. For better balance, step to the right with more space on the left in front of her. Aperture: 2.8Camera: Canon EOS 6DIso: 800 Clarissa 4 6.5 7.5 7 21 Ted Buck Pictorial Gold J1 Pleasing skin tones, good pose, a bit too tightly cropped on the left. Right side background really competes with her beautiful face. Her eyes need to be sharper. Aperture: 5Camera: Canon EOS 60DIso: 200
